shì qū yóu ji
wǒ lái shanghai zhī hòu, hái méi yǒu qu shì qū. shàng zhōu, wǒ qù le, gǐ gè shanghai zhùmíng de jǐng diǎn. wǒ xūyào liǎng gè xiǎo shí dào dá shi qù. shǒu xiān, wǒ cháng gōng jiāo chē dào xinzhuan, zhe dà gai xūyao sì shí fēn zhōng zhàn hòu wǒ cháng dì tiě. shànghái hěn dà. shànghái shì shìjiè shàng zuài dà de chéng shì. shànghái yǒu liǎn qiān wō bǎi wàn rén kǒu, yīn cǐ, Shanghai dí tiē hěn méng. Shàng ge xīngqíliù, wǒ qù le zhūmíng de Bund hé Yu Yuán. Tāmen dōu hěn bang. shǒu xiān, wǒ qù le Yu Yuan. Yu yuan shì fēicháng zhūmíng de lǎo de huā yuán, yǒu hēn duō měi lì jiàn zhù hé xiǎo hú. yīn wēi yu yuan hěn zhūmíng, zhè li yǒu hěn duō yǒu rēn. liù bǎi nián qián, yu yuan yīnwéi yí gè huǎng di de erzí. yóu lǎn le lǎo shanghai zhī hòu, wǒ qù le xīng shanghai zài Bund. The Bund, shì shanghai zuì zhūmíng de di fan. Shanghai shì yí gè hěn xiàn dài huà de chéng shì. xiàng bǐ hé qí tā chéng shì, Shanghai méiyǒu hěnduō lì shǐ.
zài Bund, nǐ néng kàn dào gāo dà jiǎn zhù. cóng xià wǔ, wú diàn dào wǎn shàng qī diǎn, wǒ zài Bund. zhè shi tài měi le. yí tiáo jiāng gé kāi le Bund hé Mǎimái qū yù. xià yí cì, wǒ xiǎng cháng chuán. sì shí nián qián, Zhōng guó shì yí gě qiōng guó jiā. Shànghái xiàngzhēng Zhōng guó de xīng cái fù hé lì liang. wǒ lái zhōng guó zī qián, wǒ fei cháng xǐhuān zhōng guó de xīng cái fù. Duì wǒ lái Shuō, Shanghai shì zuìhǎo de cheng shì.
ENGLISH:
My Visit to Downtown Shanghai
Since I have been in Shanghai I have not explored the city. Last week, I visited several famous places in Shanghai. My journey to central shanghai is 2 hours long. Firstly I take a 40 minute bus to Xinzhuan and after I take a train. Shanghai is very big. Shanghai is the biggest city in the world. It has 25 million people, therefore the Metro is very busy. Last Saturday I went to the famous Bund and Yu Yuan Gardens. They were both incredible. I started the day at the Yuan Gardens. It is a very old, famous Garden with lots of beautiful buildings and small lakes. It was a hot day which made it better. The Yuan Gardens is very famous so there were a lot of people. The Yuan gardens was built 600 years ago for a famous emperor’s son. After visiting old Shanghai, i went to New Shanghai at the Bund. The Bund is the most famous part of Shanghai. Shanghai is a very new city. it does not have a lot of history compared to other parts of China.
At the Bund, you can see the big buildings of the business district. I was at the bund from 5pm to 7m in the evening. It was beautiful. A river separates The Bund with the business area. Next time, I would like to try a boat ride. 40 years ago, china was a poor country. Shanghai symbolises China’s new wealth and power. Before I came to China, I was very interested in China’s new wealth. For me Shanghai is perfect city.